Critique Options

(APRIL 2020 UPDATE: The 2020 Florida Writing Workshop is postponed until 2021 for safety reasons. If you are signed up for the 2020 event as a paid attendee, or you would like to know more about WDW’s new 2020 online conferences — which include many recorded sessions, one-on-one pitching to agents by phone or Skype, and more — please see all info here, and be in contact with us anytime you want — writingdayworkshops@gmail.com.)

Add $69 — for an in-depth, personal critique of your one-page query letter from Chuck Sambuchino, one of the workshop’s former instructors. (This rate is a special event value for Florida Writing Workshop attendees only.) Registrants are encouraged to take advantage of the specially-priced critique, so they can send out their query letter with confidence following the workshop. Also, if you are meeting with an agent at the event, you’re essentially speaking your query letter aloud to them. Wouldn’t it be wise to give that query letter (i.e., your pitch) one great edit before that meeting?

Add $89 — for an in-depth personal critique of the first 10 double-spaced pages of your novel. Spaces with faculty for these critiques are very limited, and participating attendees get an in-person meeting at the workshop. Options:

  • Middle grade and young adult (all kinds). Also adult fiction the following categories: near-future/dystopian sci-fi, urban fantasy, contemporary, historical, women’s fiction, romance, mystery, thriller, suspense (no hard science fiction or epic fantasy, please): Faculty member Jennifer Johnson-Blalock, a former literary agent, will get your work in advance, critique the first 10 double-spaced pages of your story, meet with you for at least 10 minutes at the workshop to discuss her thoughts, and pass along written critique notes at the meeting.
  • Mainstream fiction, literary fiction, romance, women’s fiction, mystery, thriller: Faculty member Anne Clermont, a published author, will get your work in advance, critique the first 10 double-spaced pages of your work, meet with you for at least 10 minutes at the workshop to discuss thoughts, and pass along written critique notes at the meeting.
  • Children’s picture books, middle grade (all kinds), young adult (all kinds), literary fiction, mainstream fiction, historical fiction, mystery, thriller, true crime, nonfiction: Faculty member Eve Porinchak, a former literary agent, will get your work in advance, critique the first 10 double-spaced pages of your story, meet with you for at least 10 minutes at the workshop to discuss her thoughts, and pass along written critique notes at the meeting. Pictures books should be 1,000 words, maximum, and can or cannot include illustrations.
  • Literary fiction, mainstream fiction, general fiction, short stories, historical fiction, adult science fiction, adult fantasy, and memoir: Faculty member Lorin Oberweger, a professional editor, will get your work in advance, critique the first 10 double-spaced pages of your work, meet with you for at least 10 minutes at the workshop to discuss thoughts, and pass along written critique notes at the meeting.